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Some of my pics

Discussion in 'Critique Corner' started by Einherjar, 25 July 2012.

    Einherjar New Member

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    Manuel Andergassen
    Here are some of my pictures :)
    I am open for any feedback, whether its positive or negative. I used snapseed to edit them.



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    Einherjar, 25 July 2012
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    RoseCat Too sexy for shirts...

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    Beautiful work Manuel!! I especially love the second photo. :inlove:

    My only small critique is that I would have liked to see a bit more of the castle (?) in the first photo. The clouds are really lovely, but I think a bit more of the building showing would make a better composition.

    :D
    RoseCat, 25 July 2012
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    Einherjar New Member

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    Thank you very much for your critique :) its always nice to see when people like what you do. Yeah you are right on the first one i should have focused more on that building, but if i ever get the chance to go there again i will do that :)
    Thanks again!
    Einherjar, 25 July 2012
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    Yeah to build on what the great RoseCat said, look where your eye goes first then second, and ensure those bits pop. For me, my eye went first to the top of the tower which was not in focus and then to the left half of the clouds which are also a bit blurred. That building is wonderful, hope you took lots of shots. The third photo is again beautiful subject matter, my eye goes bang to the trees and they are lovely and well lit. I then go to the point of those rocks and was half hoping to see someone standing there or something. Superimpose anyone? LOL
    Nice job.
    DanKerrPhotos, 26 July 2012
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    mahoganyturtle MobiTog iOTY 2012

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    Very nice!
    mahoganyturtle, 26 July 2012
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    Gennifer Addicted

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    stellar
    Gennifer, 26 July 2012
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    lamkentucky De Vout Glazer...

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    These are lovely! Count me among those who would have enjoyed seeing more of the building in the first shot.

    Leslee

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    lamkentucky, 26 July 2012
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    Robert Lancaster Addicted

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    I really like the second image although I find the blur effect on the right a bit heavy. These kind of darkish images appeal to me, probably because I struggle to get them right myself! :D
    Robert Lancaster, 26 July 2012
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    :thumbs: I love the second image, pure Chernobyl, I would also remove the blur and bring more corrosion..The first one fails in composition + blur not good
    iColorama, 14 August 2012
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